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1.The most productive time for me is early in the morning.
I can concentrate best at this time.
2. I have always done what I have to do.
The reason that I was able to do this is that I did the first thing I had to do, even if it was something I didn't want to do.

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Hi, David. 

You did really well answering all of these questions. It is nice getting to know you more through your answer. Keep up the good work.

Regards,
Teacher Dana


The most productive time for me is early in the morning.
>>>CORRECT

I can concentrate best at this time.
>>>This is when I can concentrate best.

I have always done what I have to do.
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The reason that I was able to do this is that I did the first thing I had to do, even if it was something I didn't want to do.
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The reason I was able to do this is that I started with the most important task, even if it was something I didn¡¯t want to do.
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