¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

HOMEWORK

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: È«*¼±
2024-09-22 1725

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

How do you prefer to keep in touch with friends? Do you call, chat online, exchange text messages, or write letters?

I usualy use the chat online app.
we have famus app in korea.
It is called KaKao Talk most koreans useing it also voice calling is free.
You can use it in another country.
I think The wire telephons are getting more disappear.
In my case I think I done't use almost about over 15 years.
I done have this now.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello, Ms. Jessica! I have heard about Kakao Talk. In  the Philippines, most pople use an app called 'Messenger' and it's also for free. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
I usualy use the chat online app.
>>I usually use an online chatting app.
we have famus app in korea.
>>We have a famous one in Korea.
It is called KaKao Talk 
>>Correct!
most koreans useing it also voice calling is free.
>>Most Koreans use it and also voice calls are free.
You can use it in another country.
>>You can use it in other countries.
I think The wire telephons are getting more disappear.
>>I think, wired telephones are disappearing.
In my case I think I done't use almost about over 15 years.
>>In my case, I think, I have stopped using it for almost 15 years.
I done have this now.
>>I don't even have one now.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
140007 What activities do you like to do in autumn? ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2024-09-23 1417
140006 What do you need right now? Why? ÃÖ*ÇÑ ¿Ï·á 2024-09-23 1469
140005 Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-09-23 1526
140004 It can\'t be called sport without safety. ÀÓ*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2024-09-23 1840
140003 homework for Sep 23 ¼­*ÇÑ ¿Ï·á 2024-09-23 1990
140002 Homework À±*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2024-09-23 1391
140001 How important are cosmetics ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2024-09-23 1960
140000 Which websites are popular among the younger generation? ÃÖ*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2024-09-23 1
139999 The pros of getting a prescription ¾ç*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2024-09-23 1819
139998 What are your retirement plans? ±è*°æ ¿Ï·á 2024-09-23 1503
139997 What are the things that you care less about now? How did your... ÀÓ*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2024-09-23 1349
139996 Homework ±è*´Ô ¿Ï·á 2024-09-23 1849
139995 What do you do when you see someone in danger? À±*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2024-09-23 0
139994 Page 20. ±è*Áø ¿Ï·á 2024-09-23 0
139993 Sep 20th homework ¾È*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2024-09-22 1729
139992 What do you like least about Chuseok? Áø*È£ ¿Ï·á 2024-09-22 2
139991 Why do you think some people spend money on buying souvenirs... Áø*È£ ¿Ï·á 2024-09-22 1
139990 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-09-22 3
139989 HOMEWORK È«*¼± ¿Ï·á 2024-09-22 0
139988 Have you even seen falling stars? ¹Ú*Çö ¿Ï·á 2024-09-22 1565

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04