¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

No

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*¹Î
2024-09-21 1824

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

No I don't have hobby under the sun

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello Keon Min,

Thank you for completing your homework! Just a quick note: when you say "under the sun," it means "everything in the world" or "outdoors." For example, if someone asks, "What hobbies do you enjoy under the sun?" they might be asking about things like playing sports, gardening, or going for walks outside. Keep up the great work!

~Teacher Cathy

 

No I don't have hobby under the sun

>>No, I don't have hobbies under the sun.

¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
140416 Home work ½Å*¶ó ¿Ï·á 2024-10-14 1451
140415 Do you know some doctors who do two or more jobs in your country... Â÷*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-14 1936
140414 What other factors can you improve on with your research to... Â÷*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-14 1731
140413 10/11 home work Àå*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-10-14 1406
140412 homework ±è*Çö ¿Ï·á 2024-10-14 2113
140411 Have you ever bought something without planning it, and then... ÀÌ*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-14 1
140410 How does fashion influence the way people think about others? ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2024-10-14 1522
140409 Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what... ÀÌ*À± ¿Ï·á 2024-10-14 1550
140408 HOMEWORK FOR 10.14.2024 DIRECTIONS: Use the following... ÀÓ*Áö ¿Ï·á 2024-10-14 5
140407 What did you do last weekend? What will you do this weekend? Do... ¼­*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-14 3
140406 How do you feel about having extra work on the side while... ±è*¸° ¿Ï·á 2024-10-14 1659
140405 >> Loesje asked: \"Why wait for the weekend to have fun?\" Do... ÀÌ*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2024-10-14 0
140404 homework ¾È*µµ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-14 1169
140403 Homework Àå*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-14 1357
140402 Ȳ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-14 1615
140401 Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-10-14 1554
140400 Diary ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-14 0
140399 Explain: Banning books is like saying you can¡¯t eat steak... ¾È*À± ¿Ï·á 2024-10-14 1585
140398 What is the best age to travel? Why? ÀÓ*½Ç ¿Ï·á 2024-10-14 1332
140397 Hi, there °­*Á¤ ÁøÇàÁß 2024-10-14 0

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04