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Homework_Day5 (Q. How do you find the best restaurants to eat at?)

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I have two methods for finding good restaurants.
Fist, I search the restaurants in a portal site that named 'Naver', which is very famouse in Korea.
It's something like Google. 'Naver' offers 'Naver map', which has similar function to 'Google Maps'.
When I click the restraunt button near the site on the map, which I want to search the information, I can see many restaurant close the location I want.
'Naver map' also give the information like ratings and reviews. Additionally, Some people write the list of good restaurant around five in this application. The contents are usually very reliable, in my experience. So When I find the best restaurant, I consider whether the restaurant is included in the contents. If it included in it, I recognize it as a good restaurant.
Second, I get information from my friend who has a lot of information about restaurant. He loves foods so has many eat out experiences in his hometown, Seoul. It's absolutly good which is recognized high-quality for him.

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I have two methods for finding good restaurants.
>>> correct 
Fist, I search the restaurants in a portal site that named 'Naver', which is very famouse in Korea.
>>>  Fist, I search the restaurants in a portal site named/called 'Naver', which is very famous in Korea.
It's something like Google. 
>>>  correct 
'Naver' offers 'Naver map', which has similar function to 'Google Maps'.
>>>  correct 
When I click the restaurant button near the site on the map, which I want to search the information, I can see many restaurant close the location I want.
>>>  When I click the restaurant button near the site on the map of which I want to search the information, I can see many restaurants close to the location I want.
'Naver map' also gives the information like ratings and reviews. 
>>>    correct 
Additionally, Some people write the list of good restaurant around five in this application. 
>>>    correct 
The contents are usually very reliable, in my experience. 
>>>    correct 
So When I find the best restaurant, I consider whether the restaurant is included in the contents. 
>>>    correct 
If it included in it, I recognize it as a good restaurant.
>>>  If it is included in it, I recognize it as a good restaurant.
Second, I get information from my friend who has a lot of information about restaurants. 
>>>      correct 
He loves foods so has many eat out experiences in his hometown, Seoul.
>>>  He loves foods so has many experiences eating out in his hometown of Seoul.
It's absolutly good which is recognized high-quality for him.
>>>  It's absolutely good which he recognizes as high-quality.
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