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My MBTI

작성자: 박*경
2024-09-20 776

회원님의 영작문

I have done it. I took the MBTI test, And I received the result that my MBTI is ENFP. I did it twice, first I got the result of ENFJ, but second, the result said me that I'm ENFP. In my opinion, I took the first test when I was 19 years old, and that time I had a lot of tasks to do. So making a plan was essential process for me. "J" means iclination to keep one's plan. But after entering the university, I didn't have struggle to do all my tasks. And I can have more my own time than that time. So, naturally my personality typr turns to "P".

"ENF" is set type of my personality. I like hang out with someone, getting energy from other people. And I enjoy imagining simething such as balance game. When we do that game, I always set the situation and ask my friends to choose only one. Fianlly, my emotion fluctuate so often. I feel happy and blue so easily. But basically, I'm outgoing person and warm-hearted person. So my friends said to me that you are the embodiment of ENFP!"

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. Casey! I can totally relate to you. I have taken this test at different stages of my life and I have gotten various results. I guess, our personalities could change as we get older.
-T. Sonny
I have done it. 
>>Correct!
I took the MBTI test.
>>Correct!
And I received the result that my MBTI is ENFP. 
>>And, the result claimed that I am ENFP.
I did it twice, first I got the result of ENFJ, but second, the result said me that I'm ENFP. 
>>I took it twice. At first, I got ENFJ, but the second take said that I'm ENFP.
In my opinion, I took the first test when I was 19 years old, and that time I had a lot of tasks to do. 
>>In my opinion, it was because the first time I took it was when I was 19 and I had a lot of tasks to do that time.
So making a plan was essential process for me. 
>>So, making plans was an essential process for me.
"J" means iclination to keep one's plan. 
>>"J" means inclination to keep one's plan. 
But after entering the university, I didn't have struggle to do all my tasks. 
>>However, after entering the university, I have never struggled with all my tasks.
And I can have more my own time than that time. 
>>I also have a lot more personal time than before. 
So, naturally my personality typr turns to "P".
>>So, naturally my personality type turns to "P".
"ENF" is set type of my personality. 
>>"ENF" is my determined type of personality. 
I like hang out with someone, getting energy from other people. 
>>I like hanging out with someone as well as getting energy from other people. 
And I enjoy imagining simething such as balance game. 
>>I also enjoy imagining things, the balance game, for instance.
When we do that game, I always set the situation and ask my friends to choose only one. 
>>Correct!
Fianlly, my emotion fluctuate so often. 
>> Finally, my emotions fluctuate so often. 
I feel happy and blue so easily. 
>>I get mood swings so easily.
But basically, I'm outgoing person and warm-hearted person. 
>>But basically, I'm an outgoing and a warm-hearted person. 
So my friends said to me that you are the embodiment of ENFP!"
>>So, my friends told me that I am the embodiment of ENFP!
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