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A corporate culture of drinking a lot

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When I was at the construction company, I had many drinking parties with my seniors. I had difficult times living day by day that¡¯s because I couldn¡¯t drink a lot. However, they didn¡¯t cut me a slack in drinking. I had no choice but to drink as often and much as heavy drinkers did. On top of that, I had to get to work as early as 7 am the next morning even after drinking late with coworkers. To my surprise, not a single coworker who had drunk with me late the day before didn¡¯t fail to attend the morning exercise before starting work. Anyway, the company culture of drinking alcohol scared me a lot at first, but I found myself adjusting to it without realizing it, and I had some symptoms of addition to it. Later, I could leave the construction company and its corporate culture of heavy drinking after moving to university. Besides above, the construction company had some unique corporate cultures For example, I could take some rest in a lounge whenever I felt tired even outside lunch.

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Good morning Yeong!
There are situations in which we are chained to corporate cultures and we can do nothing with it. I am glad to hear from our previous discussion that you were able to get out of that culture which will also be beneficial to your body.
Have a good day!
Aki~

When I was at the construction company, I had many drinking parties with my seniors.
>> CORRECT!

I had difficult times living day by day that¡¯s because I couldn¡¯t drink a lot.
>> CORRECT!

However, they didn¡¯t cut me a slack in drinking.
>>> However, they didn¡¯t cut me slack in drinking.

I had no choice but to drink as often and much as heavy drinkers did.
>> CORRECT!

On top of that, I had to get to work as early as 7 am the next morning even after drinking late with coworkers.
>> CORRECT!

To my surprise, not a single coworker who had drunk with me late the day before didn¡¯t fail to attend the morning exercise before starting work.
>> CORRECT!

Anyway, the company culture of drinking alcohol scared me a lot at first, but I found myself adjusting to it without realizing it, and I had some symptoms of addition to it.
>>>  Anyway, the company culture of drinking alcohol scared me a lot at first, but I found myself adjusting to it without realizing it, and I had some symptoms in addition to it.

Later, I could leave the construction company and its corporate culture of heavy drinking after moving to university.
>> CORRECT!

Besides above, the construction company had some unique corporate cultures For example, I could take some rest in a lounge whenever I felt tired even outside lunch.
>>>  Besides the above, the construction company had some unique corporate cultures For example, I could take some rest in a lounge whenever I felt tired even outside lunch.
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