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What are the benefits and drawbacks of always making an effort to fulfill the requests of the people

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For benefits that I make an effort to fulfill the requests of the people close to me, I feel comfortable and happy. I believe that I am useful person to them. Therefore I can be more productive and filled. Also the distance between
who I care a lot can be more closer. In contrast, there are also drawbacks. When I'm overwhelmed, I feel tired and unhappy to fulfill the requests. I think it's not good to do without voluntarily. That will be uncomfortable to each other. Also if I always fulfill their requests, then sometimes they think it is reasonable and make me not to reject, too.

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Hello, Lin! Your insights are thoughtful. It's great that you feel fulfilled and productive when helping those close to you, but it's also important to recognize and manage the drawbacks. Balancing your willingness with your own well-being is key to maintaining positive relationships.
~T. Jenna

For benefits that I make an effort to fulfill the requests of the people close to me, I feel comfortable and happy. 
>>One of the benefits of making an effort to fulfill the requests of people close to me is that I feel comfortable and happy.
I believe that I am useful person to them. 
>>It makes me believe that I am a useful person to them.
Therefore I can be more productive and filled. 
>>Therefore, I can be more productive and fulfilled.
Also the distance between who I care a lot can be more closer. 
>>Another advantage is that the distance between those I care about and me can become closer / smaller.
In contrast, there are also drawbacks. 
Correct, or
>>Conversely, there are also notable drawbacks.
When I'm overwhelmed, I feel tired and unhappy to fulfill the requests. 
Correct, or
>>When I¡¯m overwhelmed, I feel exhausted and unhappy about meeting the requests.
I think it's not good to do without voluntarily. 
>>I think it's not good to do it unwillingly."
That will be uncomfortable to each other. 
>>That will be uncomfortable for each other. 
OR
>>That can create discomfort for both parties.
Also if I always fulfill their requests, then sometimes they think it is reasonable and make me not to reject, too.
>>Also, if I always fulfill their requests, they may think that it is reasonable and expect me not to reject / refuse.
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