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How old were you when you first tried alcohol? Who were you with?

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It' s not correct ,my memory when I was 20 years old.it was my first year of college
with my friends .we drunk a lot of soju with snack at campus late at night.

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Hi, Ju Mi! It was surely a memorable night! ^^ I appreciate your effort doing your homework. Always take care!
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It' s not correct ,my memory when I was 20 years old.
>>I'm not sure if it's correct since it's a memory from when I was 20 years old.
it was my first year of college
>>It was during my first year of college.
with my friends .
>>I was with my friends.
we drunk a lot of soju with snack at campus late at night.
>>We drank a lot of soju with snacks on campus late at night.
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