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What do you like best about family gatherings?

>>> At first, It's good to be together. Although we live in same space, we can't easily gather because of various reaons.

Second, I like drinking itself so much because I like its taste. I'm sure that I can't drink alchol without any foods but harmony with delicious foods raises Soju's flavor. My dad and I are great Soju-mate so we enjoy gatherings.

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Hi, Jun!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille

What do you like best about family gatherings?

>>> At first, it's good to be together. 
>> CORRECT!
Although we live in same space, we can't easily gather because of various reaons.
>> Although we live in the same space, we can't easily gather because of various reasons.

Second, I like drinking itself so much because I like its taste. 
>> CORRECT!
I'm sure that I can't drink alchol without any foods but harmony with delicious foods raises Soju's flavor. 
>> I'm sure that I can't drink alchol without any foods because delicious foods raises Soju's flavor. A delicious food harmonizes well with alcohol.
OR >> I'm sure that I can't drink alchol without any foods because delicious foods raises Soju's flavor. A delicious food goes well with alcohol. 
My dad and I are great Soju-mates so we enjoy gatherings.
>> CORRECT!

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