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What are the pros and cons of traveling alone?

>>> There is nothing to care. I can do whatever I want! I can plan alone without the interferer! And I think, It is great chance to think about my ego identity by knowing my own strengths and weaknesses.

But in my case, I might feel a little bit lonely. I always want to do everything with others. Because there is interference to me, it makes me more funny. Also it will be sad if I want to be taked a picture with view, There is not photographer next to me who is clumsy but friendly.

So If you want to rest or think about something alone, traveling alone is best choice. However unless you're in that situation, I recommend traveling with anyone you want.

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Hi, Jun!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille

What are the pros and cons of traveling alone?

>>> There is nothing to care. 
>> CORRECT!
I can do whatever I want! 
>> CORRECT!
I can plan alone without the interferer! 
>> CORRECT!
OR >>I can plan alone without being interrupted.
And I think, it is great chance to think about my ego identity by knowing my own strengths and weaknesses.
>> And I think, it is a great chance to think about my ego or identity by knowing my own strengths and weaknesses.

But in my case, I might feel a little bit lonely. 
>> CORRECT!
I always want to do everything with others. 
>> CORRECT!
Because there is interference to me, it makes me more funny. 
>> That's because there is an interference to me, it is more fun and interesting. 
Also, it will be sad if I want to be taked a picture with view, There is not photographer next to me who is clumsy but friendly.
>> Also, it will be sad if I want to be photographed with the view, there is no photographer next to me who is clumsy but friendly.

So if you want to rest or think about something alone, traveling alone is the best choice.
>> CORRECT!
However, unless you're in that situation, I recommend traveling with anyone you want.
>> CORRECT!

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