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Q: What are some activities that can be done during team building?
A: I think it might be haveing meal together and cooperating games.
If they have meal together, then they would talk with each other more, and it will strengthen their bonds.
And cooperating games will do the same role.

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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

 1. I think it might be having meal together and cooperating games.
>>I think they can have a meal together and play collaborative games.

2. If they have meal together, then they would talk with each other more, and it will strengthen their bonds.
>>If they have a meal together, then they would talk with each other more, and it will strengthen their bonds.

3. And cooperating games will do the same role.
>>Collaborative games will do the same role.

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