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The diseases are increasing these days although medical science are developing.
I think the reason of that is lack of immune and
Eating animal isn't caused disease.
I don't know We should be vegetarian or keep eating animals.
I am already ate them and I learned young generation have to meat for their growth.
It is difficult to change our eating habits.
Science have to prove the theory that people must not to eat animals.

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Ms. Sunny!
You have freely expressed your thoughts well.
Thank you for this. 
Have a great holiday!
T, Aki~


The diseases are increasing these days although medical science are developing.
>>> The diseases are increasing these days although medical science are developing.

I think the reason of that is lack of immune and Eating animal isn't caused disease.
>>> I think the reason for that is lack of strong immunity and eating animals doesn't cause disease.

I don't know We should be vegetarian or keep eating animals.
>>>  I don't know if we should be vegetarian or keep eating animals.

I am already ate them and I learned young generation have to meat for their growth.
>>> I have already eaten them and I learned the young generation has to meat for their growth.

It is difficult to change our eating habits.
>>> CORRECT!

Science have to prove the theory that people must not to eat animals.
>>>  Science has to prove the theory that people must not eat animals.
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