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Q: Why is there a need for team buildings in some institutions?
A: I think it's because team building makes team work more fluent.
If people don't know each other, and they need to work together, it wouldn't be an easy job casue they might not easily talk to each other.
So, people can work more efficiently if they are closer to each other.

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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think it's because team building makes team work more fluent.
>>I think it's because team building makes the team work more efficiently.

2. If people don't know each other, and they need to work together, it wouldn't be an easy job casue they might not easily talk to each other.
>>If people don't know each other and they need to work together, it wouldn't be an easy job because they might not easily talk to each other.

3. So, people can work more efficiently if they are closer to each other.
>>CORRECT!


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