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Why is it important to obey your parents?

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I think it's important because we obey them, we will be a good adult.
For example, first we do housework, the parents will be happy.
And second, we study well the parents will be happy too.
And lastly, if we don't do many games, the will be happy.
These are the reasons why obeying parents are good.

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Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille

I think it's important because we obey them, we will be a good adult.
>> I think it's important because if we obey them, we will be a good adult.
OR >> I think it's important because if we obey them, we will be good adults.
For example, first we do housework, our parents will be happy.
>> CORRECT!
And second, we study well the parents will be happy too.
>> Second, if we study well, our parents will be happy too.
And lastly, if we don't do many games, the will be happy.
>> And lastly, if we don't play many games, they will be happy.
These are the reasons why obeying parents are good.
>> These are the reasons why obeying our parents is good.

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