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Do you think holidays are important? Why?

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In my opinion, having the holiday is necessary to live good life for everybody.
When I was tired and bored in the company, I was waiting for only holiday.
Holiday is diffrent from weekend. Weekend is coming usually, holiday is not, so I am considering more special.
In the weekend, I would like to rest at home, for example, watching nexflex, ordering delivery with my lunch, taking nap.
By the way, I usually go to the theater, go to shopping mall during the holiday.
In comparison with the weekend schdule, more live and active.
Then I get regenerated energy, I'm back to office and work hard.
Everyone might think the importance of break, and also I know.
So, I love holiday

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Hi Gloria,

You¡¯ve made a great point about the importance of holidays in our lives. It¡¯s wonderful to see how you value your time off and use it to recharge and enjoy different activities. Finding that balance between relaxation and active time is key to staying energized and motivated. Keep enjoying your holidays and taking care of yourself!

~Teacher Cathy

 

In my opinion, having the holiday is necessary to live good life for everybody. 

>>In my opinion, having holidays is necessary for everyone to live a good life.

When I was tired and bored in the company, I was waiting for only holiday. 

>>When I was tired and bored at work, I looked forward to the holidays.

Holiday is diffrent from weekend. 

>>A holiday is different from a weekend.

Weekend is coming usually, holiday is not, so I am considering more special. 

>>Weekends come regularly, but holidays do not, so I consider them more special.

In the weekend, I would like to rest at home, for example, watching nexflex, ordering delivery with my lunch, taking nap. 

>>On weekends, I like to rest at home by watching Netflix, ordering delivery for lunch, and taking a nap.

By the way, I usually go to the theater, go to shopping mall during the holiday. 

>>However, during the holidays, I usually go to the theater and visit shopping malls.

In comparison with the weekend schdule, more live and active. 

>>Compared to my weekend routine, holidays are more lively and active.

Then I get regenerated energy, I'm back to office and work hard. 

>>This way, I recharge my energy and return to the office ready to work hard.

Everyone might think the importance of break, and also I know. 

>>Everyone understands the importance of breaks, and I do too.

So, I love holiday. 

>>Therefore, I love holidays.

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