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Thank you today T. Jeny.
I am very happy and fun with your conversation today.
When we are talk in English, I often get frustrate because I can't think of English words.
However, I also feel improved me after I checked them in the English dictionary after then.

Choose the correct word to complete the sentence.
1. These pants are too long. I want the tailor to alter them.
2. Our company has found a beautiful site for our new plant.
3. The principal reason for his resignation was low pay.
4. When the boy ran in front of the car, Mr. Nelson stepped on the brake.
5. You made a mistake here. This word isn't right.

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Hello Nicole!!!


I can see you're trying hard to learn. Your discipline is good, keep it up. Keep applying in your daily life what you learn everyday. Knowledge will give you power. Power will give the confidence that you need.  You can do it, if others can, so can you. Enjoy your day! ^^
T. Jeny


Thank you today T. Jeny.
>>Thank you for today's class T, Jeny
I am very happy and fun with your conversation today.
>>I was very happy and had fun having a conversation with you today.
When we are talk in English, I often get frustrate because I can't think of English words.
>>When we are talking in English, I often get frustrated because I can't remember some English words.
However, I also feel improved me after I checked them in the English dictionary after then.

>>However, I can feel that I am improving after checking the words in the dictionary.
Choose the correct word to complete the sentence.
1. These pants are too long. I want the tailor to alter them.
>>correct
2. Our company has found a beautiful site for our new plant.
>>correct
3. The principal reason for his resignation was low pay.
>>correct
4. When the boy ran in front of the car, Mr. Nelson stepped on the brake.
>>correct
5. You made a mistake here. This word isn't right.
>>correct
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