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Do you think you can teach someone to be successful?

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2024-09-11 611

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Yes, I think that's possible.
It takes many conditions and abilities to succeed.
First of all, you may have to have a lot of knowledge in field, but I think you can teach someone to acquire that knowledge.
I also think teaching someone can help you set objective goals.
And I think I can also teach someone to keep them in mind to succeed.
In a broad sense, I think not only teaching but also being able to help someone become a role model and being an object to laern like a mirror can teach.

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Hello, Yun!
A more prosperous society can be created by people teaching one another. I think that the more we impart our knowledge, the more successful we become. Thus, I sincerely hope that nobody withholds knowledge in an effort to outperform others. 
Chammy
Yes, I think that's possible.
It takes many conditions and abilities to succeed.
>>Correct
First of all, you may have to have a lot of knowledge in field, but I think you can teach someone to acquire that knowledge.
OR
>> First of all, you might need to be very knowledgeable in the field, but I believe you can teach someone to become knowledgeable in it.
I also think teaching someone can help you set objective goals.
OR
>>I also believe that being taught by others may help you in establishing certain goals.
And I think I can also teach someone to keep them in mind to succeed.
>> I think I am capable of motivating someone to remain positive in success.
In a broad sense, I think not only teaching but also being able to help someone become a role model and being an object to laern like a mirror can teach.
>>In a broader sense, I think that not only teaching, but also serving as a role model and being an object of learning like a mirror, can be instructive.
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