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How often we should visit a doctor depends on the conditions of our body and mind. Except for regular check up, I don\'t like to visit a doctor. I don't understand why some people pay frequent visits to see their doctors. It was reported that there was big waste of money and resources because of too frequent visits of potential patients.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
Based on your answer, I think frequent visits to doctors are indeed possible in Korea due to a good health care system. People don¡¯t have to worry about visiting often since it is covered by their insurance. It¡¯s the complete opposite in my country, where people will rarely visit the hospital unless their condition is already severe.
- T. Caitlyn
How often we should visit a doctor depends on the conditions of our body and mind. 
>> CORRECT
Except for regular check up, I don\'t like to visit a doctor. 
>> Except for regular check-ups, I don¡¯t like to visit a doctor.
I don't understand why some people pay frequent visits to see their doctors. 
>> CORRECT
It was reported that there was big waste of money and resources because of too frequent visits of potential patients.
>> It was reported that there was a big waste of money and resources due to the too frequent visits of potential patients.
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