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What do you think when you read or see news reports on COVID-19 and consider that a common cold?

>> I think that it is very dangerous and silly thinking.
Actually, I had been cought COVID-19. It is different from common cold.
COVID-19 is similar the flu more than cold. When i have COIVD-19. i experienced many things.
First of all, it is sored a throat. The hurt is very hard. i want to say F-word. even, i want to cut my throat.
And then is had runny nose. it flow such as water fall.
Finally, it had coughs heavily, and endlessly.
it is terrible. it is different of common cold. so, people who said that COVID-19 is alike cold are dumbs that haven't been caught COVID.

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Good day, Mr. Lee!
Wow, you have time on your hands today! Thank you for doing your homework!
I'm sorry to hear that you suffered from COVID-19. Few people were ASYMPTOMATIC  when they were infected with COVID-19. Meaning there were no symptoms at all. Two of my friends were like that.
Take care of yourself always!
T. Aki~


I think that it is very dangerous and silly thinking.
>>> CORRECT!

Actually, I had been cought COVID-19. It is different from common cold.
>>> Actually, I had been caught COVID-19. It is different from the common cold.

COVID-19 is similar the flu more than cold. When i have COIVD-19. i experienced many things.
>>> COVID-19 is similar to the flu more than cold. When I had the COVID-19. I experienced many things.

First of all, it is sored a throat. The hurt is very hard. i want to say F-word. even, i want to cut my throat.
>>> First of all, it is sore a throat. It hurts badly.  I want to say the F-word.  I even want to cut my throat.
 
And then is had runny nose. it flow such as water fall.
>>> Then I had a runny nose, it was flowing like a waterfall.

Finally, it had coughs heavily, and endlessly.
>>> Finally, it had coughs heavily, and endlessly.

it is terrible. it is different of common cold. so, people who said that COVID-19 is alike cold are dumbs that haven't been caught COVID.
>>> It was terrible. it is different from the common cold. so, people who said that COVID-19 is alike cold are dumbs that haven't been caught COVID.

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