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Is it always good to participate in contest or competitions?

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I think it's good to parricipate in contest or competitions.
But that people want to participate that contest or conpetitons.
One day, my mom said "do you want to go to the AI contest?"
But I said "NO." and my mom said "just go!".
These are the reasons why I think it's good to go to the contest or a competitions.

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Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille


I think it's good to parricipate in contest or competitions.
>> I think it's good to participate in contests or competitions.
But that people want to participate that contest or conpetitons.
>> But, there are people who don't want to participate in contests or competitions.
One day, my mom said "do you want to go to the AI contest?"
>> CORRECT!
But I said "NO" and my mom said "just go!".
>> CORRECT!
These are the reasons why I think it's good to go to the contest or a competitions.
>> These are the reasons why I think it's good to go to a contest or a competition.

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