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Question: Do you think cosmetics are good for the skin?

Answer: No, If you wear a makeup, my skin will get bad later.

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Nicely done, Belle! Your written sentences have been improving. Please focus on the other areas that needs more practice. Try to add more sentences next time for better expression of your thoughts. See you in class!
- Teacher Angela


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