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The limitations of oriental medicines

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One of the limitations is that most treatments require some time and frequent visits of patients. And we cannot know the ingredients of the prescribed medicine. And the medication period is usually more than one month. These days, some patients can take the medications only for half a month. The prices of medications are expensive compared to the medications of western hospitals.

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Happy Friday, Gi Yean!
If we think about it, if people want fast treatment at a cheaper price, going to Western hospitals is still the solution. However, as you mentioned in class, Western medicine has a very strong effect on our bodies, and I think taking medications frequently can damage our internal organs and make us immune to them.
- T. Caitlyn
One of the limitations is that most treatments require some time and frequent visits of patients. 
>> CORRECT
And we cannot know the ingredients of the prescribed medicine. 
>> CORRECT
And the medication period is usually more than one month. 
>> CORRECT
These days, some patients can take the medications only for half a month. 
>> These days, some patients can take the medications for only half a month.
The prices of medications are expensive compared to the medications of western hospitals.
>> The prices of medications are more expensive compared to those at Western hospitals.
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