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What are some important things to consider when starting a garden?

작성자: 박*호
2024-09-06 776

회원님의 영작문

Most Koreans live in apartments, and apartments only have communal gardens and no gardens for individual households.
So gardening is not a common activity for Koreans, especially those who live in cities.
However, since a garden is a place to grow plants and flowers, I think you should choose a place that gets plenty of sunlight and is easy to water.
I also think that you should consider planting plants and flowers that suit your climate and soil when starting your garden.

P.S.
I was happy to study English with teacher Christine for the past 7 months.
Christine you are a really great English teacher.
Thanks to you, my English skills improved a little and I became interested in the Philippines.
Recently, 100 Filipino domestic helpers also started working in Korea. I hope that more Filipinos who are fluent in English will work in more fields in Korea.
Hope to see you next time.
Thank you again.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you so much, Sun! 

I'll see you next time! Enjoy your trip to Vietnam. 

- Kristine ^^ 

Most Koreans live in apartments, and apartments only have communal gardens and no gardens for individual households.
>> Most Koreans reside in apartments, which are only built with shared gardens rather than private ones for each household.
So gardening is not a common activity for Koreans, especially those who live in cities.
>> Therefore, gardening is not a common pastime among Koreans, particularly those who live in cities.
However, since a garden is a place to grow plants and flowers, I think you should choose a place that gets plenty of sunlight and is easy to water.
>> However since a garden is a place to cultivate flowers and plants, I believe you should pick a location that gets lots of sunlight and is convenient for watering.
I also think that you should consider planting plants and flowers that suit your climate and soil when starting your garden.
>> When starting a garden, I also think that you should be cautious about growing flowers and plants that are appropriate for your climate and soil.

P.S.
I was happy to study English with teacher Christine for the past 7 months.
>> For the past seven months, I have enjoyed studying English with teacher Christine.
Christine you are a really great English teacher.
>> You are an excellent English teacher.
Thanks to you, my English skills improved a little and I became interested in the Philippines.
>> My English got a little better because of you, and I started to get interested in the Philippines.
Recently, 100 Filipino domestic helpers also started working in Korea. 
>> A hundred Filipino domestic helpers have recently begun employment in Korea.
I hope that more Filipinos who are fluent in English will work in more fields in Korea.
>> I'd like to see more English-speaking Filipinos employed in more fields in Korea.
Hope to see you next time.
>> Correct. 
Or >> I hope to run into you again soon.
Thank you again.
>> Once again, thank you.
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