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A food of taking me back

작성자: 오*영
2024-09-05 688

회원님의 영작문



As I explain a detailed story, It’s got longer.
I did homework.
plz check the attatchment.
Have a nice day^^

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Stella! Thank you for you wonderful story. It makes me crave kimbap. I like kimbap, too! ^^ Thank you for today's homework. Have fun and enjoy your day.
~T. Jewel
Unfortunately, There is no special local food in my hometown.
>>CORRECT
OR
>>Unfortunately, there aren't any special local foods in my hometown.
However, There is a food takes me back to my childhood.
>>However, there is a food that takes me back to my childhood.
My mother is not the best cook, so I'm fortunately not missing the mom's food, except only one food.
>>My mother is not the best cook, so fortunately, I don't miss her cooking, except for one dish.
It's kim-bap in my case.
>>In my case, it's kim-bap.
When I was young, I had to take the runch box on school's picnic day.
>>When I was young, I had to take a lunch box on the school's picnic day.
My mother was good at beautifully making kim-bap .
>>My mother was good at making kim-bap beautifully.
These days, we can find and eat it everywhere.
>>CORRECT
OR
>>These days, we can find kim-bap and enjoy it almost everywhere.
But we could not find on usal days, at that time.
>>But we couldn't find it on a regular basis back then.
However, It was not very delicious for me, at that time.
>>However, it wasn’t very delicious to me at that time.
Maybe it was that I liked going picnic on school.
>>Maybe it was because I liked going on picnics at school.
but I sometimes feel It take me back to my childhood.
>>But sometimes it takes me back to my childhood.
And I can remeber the story.
>>And I can remember the story well.
My mother always asked me that "Is it delicous?" and said how to make it.
>>My mother always asked me, 'Is it delicious?' and told me how to make it.
And then, I just noded and answered "yes, ok" or "Thanks".
>>Then, I just nodded and responded with 'Yes, okay' or 'Thanks.'
I can remeber her smiling , feeling and the atmosphare.
>>I can remember her smiling, the way she felt, and the atmosphere.
So, I like the kim-bap
>>So, I really like kim-bap.
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