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I can find myself speaking English in academy class ,application "speak voca" and kakao talk.
The way of speaking is different each.
App is following the listening test.
Kacao chatt is conversation with writting.
All of them are helpful for developing my English.

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Hello, Ms. Sunny!
I am thrilled to know how passionate you are about English. I hope all students will be like you, finding ways to develop your skills more.
Have a great day!
Aki~

I can find myself speaking English in academy class ,application "speak voca" and kakao talk.
>>> I find myself speaking English in my academy class and through the application "Speak Voca" and Kakaotalk.

The way of speaking is different each.
>>> Each has a different way of speaking.

App is following the listening test.
>>> The App allows me to follow a listening test.

Kacao chatt is conversation with writing.
>>> The Kako chat offers conversation and writing.

All of them are helpful for developing my English.
>>> All of them helped build my English skills.
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