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If you could design your own park, what would you put in it?

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I will put trees and I will put some chairs to sit.
I will also put snackscar so when someone is hungry they can eat something in the car.

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Hi Sunny!
Your statements are really on point.
They are both direct and expressive.
I also like the examples you gave.
Keep up the good work!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I will put trees and I will put some chairs to sit.
>> I will put some trees and I will put some chairs for people to sit on. 
I will also put snackscar so when someone is hungry they can eat something in the car.
>> I will also put food trucks so people who feel hungry can eat something. 
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