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Thank you today T. Jeny.
We are talking about digital marketing nowadays.
I usually work in front of the computer.
This means that I am often exposed to digital marketing.
I Always think that I need to ignore many advertisements and temptations on the internet.
It is not so easy, I heard that one of the trends is reading a book for young people.
It means maybe many people are tired of excessive advertisements.

Correct the following sentences:
1. New York is a big city.
2. A cow is a useful animal.
3. Honesty is the best policy.
4. France is a great country.
5. The sun rises in the east.
6. I saw him when he was a child.
7. Who has not seen a tiger?
8. Milk is very nutritious.
9. Man is after all animal.
10. How beautiful the stars are!

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Good day Nicole^^


It's tough to have big responsibilities, but that's what makes life.
We have to be strong enough for our responsibilities.
Anyway, enjoy your day.
I'll see you!!

T. Jeny


Thank you today T. Jeny.
>>correct
We are talking about digital marketing nowadays.
>>correct
I usually work in front of the computer.
>>correct
This means that I am often exposed to digital marketing.
>>correct
I Always think that I need to ignore many advertisements and temptations on the internet.
>>correct
It is not so easy, I heard that one of the trends is reading a book for young people.
>>It is not so easy. I heard that one of the trends for young people is reading a book.
It means maybe many people are tired of excessive advertisements.

>>It means that many people are tired of excessive advertisements.
Correct the following sentences:
1. New York is a big city.
>>correct
2. A cow is a useful animal.
>>correct
3. Honesty is the best policy.
>>correct
4. France is a great country.
>>correct
5. The sun rises in the east.
>>Sun rises in the east.
6. I saw him when he was a child.
>>correct
7. Who has not seen a tiger?
>>correct
8. Milk is very nutritious.
>>correct
9. Man is after all animal.
>>correct
10. How beautiful the stars are!
>>correct
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