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What\'s the most innovative piece of technology you\'ve encountered recently?

작성자: 이*윤
2024-09-02 609

회원님의 영작문

Deepfake technology is a technology that I have encountered recently.
Actually, it's a technology I've encountered before, but it's a serious problem a few days ago and it's a big problem in society.
Deepfake is a combination of deep learning and fake and refers to the technology of synthesizing images with AI.
In the past, it was a small problem of creating fake news, but now it is used as a sex crime and is a problem.
People of various ages are victims of crimes, resulting in serious consequences.

P.S. Actually, I listened to the pronunciation and practiced every weekend, but it's not working well. I'll try harder to get better pronunciation! Thank you so much for celebrating me a happy birthday!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Yun!~
I agree that deepfake is a modern trend. In fact, I frequently come across social media pictures that become viral in which people alter their faces to fit an image of someone else. Although it is enjoyable, it also has several downsides therefore people must exercise caution when utilizing these tools.
Chammy
Deepfake technology is a technology that I have encountered recently.
OR
>>I recently came across a technology called deepfake.
Actually, it's a technology I've encountered before, but it's a serious problem a few days ago and it's a big problem in society.
OR
>>Actually, I've dealt with this technology before, but a few days ago, it became seriously bothersome and had a significant impact on society.
Deepfake is a combination of deep learning and fake and refers to the technology of synthesizing images with AI.
OR
The term "deepfake," which combines the terms "deep learning" and "fake," describes the use of AI to create artificial images.
In the past, it was a small problem of creating fake news, but now it is used as a sex crime and is a problem.
People of various ages are victims of crimes, resulting in serious consequences.
>>Correct
P.S. Actually, I listened to the pronunciation and practiced every weekend, but it's not working well. I'll try harder to get better pronunciation! Thank you so much for celebrating me a happy birthday!
>> P.S. Actually, I listened to the pronunciation and practiced every weekend, but it wasn't working well. I'll try harder to get better pronunciation! Thank you so much for celebrating my happy birthday!
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