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My special experience made up with someone

작성자: 김*민
2024-09-02 399

회원님의 영작문

I want to tell you the made-up story with my friends even though it is different with HOMEWORK question.

I had a problem with my friend who met in university.
One day she had a boyfriend and got a many time with him rather than me.
That's a natural, but I couldn't understand it because I feel I lost my only friend!
So I tried to stay away from her, and I even ignored her when I saw her on the street!

Finally my friend got angry to me, so she wanted to talked with me and I accepted.
We cried while talking about what we felt sad each other, and we ended up clearing the misunderstanding.
And now, we have kept our relationship during 10 years!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello there, Min!

Thank you for sending me this story of a 'kiss and make up'. It is an idiom that means fixing an issue between someone you had a a bad blood with. This story is actually what the homework requires for an answer. Well done!

As you age, your friends mature with their relationships. This is also the same with you. In case you had your boyfriend too that time, you will lack time devoted to your friend. It works in both ways. However, it was mature and caring for your good friend to talk to you and clear things up regarding your friendship. After all, men may come and go but not that one good friend who is like a sister when you had no one.

I am certain that you will remain friends for life. My bestfriend and I have been together for 28 years and we had some arguments in the past but we always fixed them through time.

Below, you had very good correct sentences. Take note of the ones that have underscored words or phrases and study their structures carefully. All in all, your story telling skills as well as composition skills are very good!

See you in class soon!

-T. Donna~

I want to tell you the made-up story with my friends even though it is different with HOMEWORK question.
>> I want to tell you the make-up story with my friends even though it is different with the HOMEWORK question.

I had a problem with my friend who met in university.
>> I had a problem with my friend who I met in the university.

One day she had a boyfriend and got a many time with him rather than me.
>> One day, she had a boyfriend and got a lot of time with him rather than me.

That's a natural, but I couldn't understand it because I feel I lost my only friend!
>> Correct!

So I tried to stay away from her, and I even ignored her when I saw her on the street!
>> Correct!

Finally my friend got angry to me, so she wanted to talked with me and I accepted.
>> Finally my friend got angry to me, so she wanted to talk with me and I accepted it.

We cried while talking about what we felt sad each other, and we ended up clearing the misunderstanding.
>> We cried while talking about how sad we felt for each other, and we ended up clearing the misunderstanding.

And now, we have kept our relationship during 10 years!
>> And now, we have kept our relationship for 10 years!
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