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How do you avoid arguments?

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I have little argument lately. When I was worked often had argument. I think when have argument, we need to listen carefully to other's opinions. Don't say only own opinions. People thinks that own idea is right. When we hear other opinions, we again think own opinions and problems. So I think that to hear other's opinions is very importent.

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Hi Eva! 

Thank you for sharing your thoughts! You're absolutely right, listening to others is so important. When we take the time to hear someone else's ideas, it helps us understand their point of view and maybe even see things differently. Keep practicing this, and you'll find that arguments can turn into helpful conversations. You're doing great. 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

I have little argument lately.  

>>I had some arguments lately. 

When I was worked often had argument.  

>>When I'm at work, I often have arguments. 

I think when have argument, we need to listen carefully to other's opinions.  

>>I think when we have an argument, we need to listen carefully to other's opinions. 

Don't say only own opinions.  

>>You shouldn't only talk about your own opinions. 

People thinks that own idea is right.  

>>People think that their idea is always right. 

When we hear other opinions, we again think own opinions and problems.  

>>When we hear other people's opinions, we reconsider ours and rethink the problems. 

So I think that to hear other's opinions is very importent. 

>>So, I think hearing other's opinions is very important. 

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