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Thank you today T. Jeny.
I like your sentences today.

Study as hard as you can, so you¡¯ll never regret anything.
Learn as if you were to live forever.

We will die someday. But, we don't need to scared about that because we can't predict it anyway.
It's easier just to forget the fact for the fun and valuable life.

1. These pants are too long. I want the tailor to altar them.
2. Our company has found a beautiful site for our new plant.
3. The principal reason for his resignation was low pay.
4. When the boy ran in front of the car, Mr. Nelson stepped on the brake.
5. You made a mistake here. This word isn't right.

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Hello Nicole,

Great job in your homework!!!

I can see you're trying hard to learn. Your discipline is good, keep it up. Keep applying in your daily life what you learn every day. Knowledge will give you power. Power will give the confidence that you need.  You can do it if others can, so can you. Enjoy your day! ^^
T. Jeny


Thank you today T. Jeny.
>>correct
I like your sentences today.
>>correct
Study as hard as you can, so you¡¯ll never regret anything.
>>correct
Learn as if you were to live forever.

>>correct
We will die someday.
>>correct
 But, we don't need to scared about that because we can't predict it anyway.
>> But, we don't need to be scared about that because we can't predict it anyway.
It's easier just to forget the fact for the fun and valuable life.

>>It's easier just to forget the fact for fun and valuable life.
1. These pants are too long. I want the tailor to altar them.
>>alter  
2. Our company has found a beautiful site for our new plant.
>>correct
3. The principal reason for his resignation was low pay.
>>correct
4. When the boy ran in front of the car, Mr. Nelson stepped on the brake.
>>correct
5. You made a mistake here. This word isn't right.
>>correct
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