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Should all medicine be free?

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I think that in order for everyone to lead a happy human life, they should receive the government support at least in the education and medical sectors. But I don't think that all medicine or education should be free. Because there are many differences between individuals.

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Hello, Gi Yean!
Thank you for explaining your homework in class earlier. I agree with you. Not everyone prioritizes their health, and each individual has different needs, so making medicine free for everyone might be unfair and could also make people care less about their health.
- T. Caitlyn 
I think that in order for everyone to lead a happy human life, they should receive the government support at least in the education and medical sectors. 
>> I think that in order for everyone to lead a happy life, they should receive government support, at least in the education and medical sectors.
But I don't think that all medicine or education should be free. 
>> CORRECT
Because there are many differences between individuals.
>> This is because there are many differences between individuals.
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