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What do you like the most about your family?

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I like my family. I like my husband and sons. My family like to talk together. My family has good relationship. Even we don't contact often, but importent thing often talk to each other. We always respect each own idea. When my sons weres child, they always fought and made cried. They are grew up fine and now have good relationship. So I am very happy.

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Hi Eva!

Thank you for doing your homework!  It¡¯s wonderful to hear how much you enjoy talking and spending time with each other. It sounds like you have a great relationship with your husband and sons. I¡¯m glad to know that even though you don¡¯t talk all the time, you still keep in touch and respect each other¡¯s ideas. It¡¯s amazing how your sons grew up and now have a good relationship with each other. Your happiness really shines through your words! Keep up the great work!

~Teacher Cathy

 

I like my family.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I love my family.

I like my husband and sons.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I like my husband and my sons.

My family like to talk together.

>>My family likes talking with each other.

My family has good relationship.

>>My family has a good relationship.

Even we don't contact often, but importent thing often talk to each other.

>>We don't contact each other often, but the important thing is talking to each other once in a while.

We always respect each own idea.

>>We always respect each of our ideas.

When my sons weres child, they always fought and made cried.

>>When my sons were just a child, they have always fought and made each other cry.

They are grew up fine and now have good relationship.

>>But they grew up fine and they now have a good relationship.

So I am very happy.

>>CORRECT

OR>>So, I'm very glad.

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