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My feelings after apologizing

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I feel uncomfortable until I apologize to someone.
But after apologizing, I feel much better than before.
And I'm ashamed of my behavior that I got angry or spoken in temperamental voice to someone.

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Hi, Min!

There is nothing to be ashamed of in apologizing unless you do not mean it. In your case, I think you are very sensible and calm. Most of often than not, kind people are so very convincing when they say they are sorry.

Congratulations for composing all of your sentences perfectly! I am so proud of your accuracy, diligence, and effort in answering all of your homework as well as maintaining excellence in your output.

See you again tomorrow.

-T. Donna~

I feel uncomfortable until I apologize to someone.
>> Correct!

But after apologizing, I feel much better than before.
>> Correct!

And I'm ashamed of my behavior that I got angry or spoken in temperamental voice to someone.
>> Correct!

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