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My favorite TV show is teachers. From now on I introduce teachers. At first, I tell you which contents Teachers have. Teachers is a program that some teachers appear on TV and some Mc do too. For every episode, each of students appears on TV. They have a variety of stories. They want that teachers teach how to study well. If they appear on TV, they take the exam and teachers evaluate them in the basic of the test result. Then teachers teach what is needed for them. The next, I introduce the reason I like the program. There are many kinds of something to learn from the teachers. And as you know,it is entertainment. So it is funny. Teachers have many advantages. So I recommend you this program.

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Jun,

You quickly answered question. Well done!

-Teacher Ash


My favorite TV show is teachers.
>> My favorite TV show is "Teachers". 

 From now on I introduce teachers. 
>> I am going to tell you about this show. 

At first, I tell you which contents Teachers have.
>> First, I will tell you the contents of the show. 

 Teachers is a program that some teachers appear on TV and some Mc do too.
>> "Teachers" is a program that some teachers would join as guests on the show with some MCs hosting the show. 

 For every episode, each of students appears on TV.
>> In every episode, students are also part of the show.

 They have a variety of stories.
>> They have various stories to tell. 

 They want that teachers teach how to study well.
>> They want teachers to teach how to study well.

 If they appear on TV, they take the exam and teachers evaluate them in the basic of the test result.
>> When the students appear on TV, they need to take an exam, and the guest teachers would evaluate them based on the test result.

 Then teachers teach what is needed for them.
>> Then the teachers explain what they need to improve on based on the result of their test. 

 The next, I introduce the reason I like the program.
>> Next, I will tell you why I like the program. 

 There are many kinds of something to learn from the teachers. 
>> It is because there are many things that I learn from the teachers in the program.

And as you know,it is entertainment.
>> As you know, this show is entertaining. 

 So it is funny. 
>> It is also funny. 

Teachers have many advantages. 
>> You will benefit a lot by watching this show. 

So I recommend you this program.
>> So, I recommend you watch this program. 
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