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Write about a time when you had to work in a team.

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- What was the project or goal your team was working on?
I had experience about IPO(Initial Public Offer).
the goal of my team was to sucees IPO.

- What role did you play in the team?
My role was making a documents to submit to goverment and stock market. we called this documents "public disclosure".

- What were the challenges and successes, and what did you learn from the experience?
The documents was contained many information, not only financial data, but also technologies and company's owner informations.
So, it was difficult gathering many datas from many division.

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Hi! I¡¯m so happy you put in the effort to complete the homework. You did a brilliant job sharing your experiences—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^



My role was making a documents to submit to goverment and stock market.
>> My role involved preparing the documents to be submitted to the government and the stock market.

we called this documents "public disclosure".
>> We referred to these documents as "public disclosures."

The documents was contained many information, not only financial data, but also technologies and company's owner informations.
>>The documents contained a lot of information, including financial data, technologies, and details about the company's owners. 

So, it was difficult gathering many datas from many division.
>> Gathering all the necessary data from various divisions was challenging.

I had experience about IPO(Initial Public Offer).
>> I had experience with an IPO (Initial Public Offering). 

the goal of my team was to sucees IPO.
>>
The goal of my team was to successfully complete the IPO.

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