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Who do you think is the most beautiful person alive today?

작성자: 이*윤
2024-08-28 71

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Well, that's a really difficult question. I'll have to write an answer by mixing some jokes. HAHAHA :)
Among the celebrities, I haven't seen anyone in real life, but today's generation thinks that Cha Eun-woo is the prettiest and most handsome. It is said that the people who saw it in person are so pretty that they are shocked.
However, I think Byun Woo-seok, the male lead of lovely-runner, is the prettiest and most handsome.(It's my subjective opinion, and it has little bit of self-interest. HAHA!!)
He is tall, pretty, cute and handsome, and he is my ideal type.
Umm, among ordinary people, my mom? HAHA, I'm joking.
I like people who give to others. That's why I think people who serve are great and like them.
My mom is good at giving things to others and she is very compassionate.
She works at work, raises I and my younger brother, prepares meals, and even goes swimming for exercise, right? It think it's really great.
That's why she must be a pretty person.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Yun!~
I agree that good personalities and characters make a person beautiful regardless of outward appearance. But I undoubtedly agree that Cha Eun-woo is the most attractive HAHAHAH!!! 
Your composition really made my day ^__^
Chammy
Well, that's a really difficult question. I'll have to write an answer by mixing some jokes. HAHAHA :)
OR
>>That is, indeed, a really tough question. I'll have to write an answer that includes some humor. HAHAHA:)
Among the celebrities, I haven't seen anyone in real life, but today's generation thinks that Cha Eun-woo is the prettiest and most handsome. 
>>Correct
It is said that the people who saw it in person are so pretty that they are shocked.
>> According to people, those who have seen him in person are shocked by his beauty.
However, I think Byun Woo-seok, the male lead of lovely-runner, is the prettiest and most handsome.
>>Correct
 (It's my subjective opinion, and it has little bit of self-interest. HAHA!!)
>>  (It's my subjective opinion, and it has a little bit of self-interest. HAHA!!)
He is tall, pretty, cute and handsome, and he is my ideal type.
Umm, among ordinary people, my mom? HAHA, I'm joking.
>>Correct
I like people who give to others. That's why I think people who serve are great and like them.
>> I appreciate people who give to others. That is why I think people who serve are wonderful and I like them.
My mom is good at giving things to others and she is very compassionate.
>>Correct
She works at work, raises I and my younger brother, prepares meals, and even goes swimming for exercise, right?
>> She works, raises me and my younger brother, prepares meals, and even goes swimming for exercise, right?
 It think it's really great.
>> I think it's really great.
That's why she must be a pretty person.
>>Correct
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