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Thank you today T. Jeny
Today, I thought about the online and offline worlds with you.
When I realized that I experienced both worlds and was in the transition period from analog to digital worlds, I felt lucky.
Our conversation is worthy and fun.


1. In the morning the sea was (calm), but it became stormy in the evening.
2. He has been (admitted) to the hospital. He will be left after a few days.
3. How can you be so (partial)? I thought you were quite impartial.
4. You must be more (careful) when you write. You make a lot of mistakes because you are careless.
5. He (admitted) his mistake, but his friend denied it.

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Hello Nicole,


I would always appreciate the kindness and optimism you've shown.  In addition, you always acknowledge and listen to
corrections given to you. Keep doing that because it would help you a lot to improve faster.

Thank you for your homework.

Always Smile!!!

T Jeny 


Thank you today T. Jeny
>>correct
Today, I thought about the online and offline worlds with you.
>>correct
When I realized that I experienced both worlds and was in the transition period from analog to digital worlds, I felt lucky.
>>correct
Our conversation is worthy and fun.

>>correct

1. In the morning the sea was (calm), but it became stormy in the evening.
>>correct
OR>>In the morning the sea was calm, but it became rough in the evening.
2. He has been (admitted) to the hospital. He will be left after a few days.
>>He has been admitted to the hospital. He will be discharged after a few days.
3. How can you be so (partial)? I thought you were quite impartial.
>>correct
4. You must be more (careful) when you write. You make a lot of mistakes because you are careless.
>>correct
5. He (admitted) his mistake, but his friend denied it.
>>correct
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