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In what situations do you think it’s beneficial to be reserved?

작성자: 박*호
2024-08-27 296

회원님의 영작문

It is known that introverts generally do not enjoy making friends or talking to other people and prefer to spend time alone.
Therefore, I think introverts are not suitable for general companies where they have to meet, talk to, and persuade many people, and sometimes actively promote their products to customers.
However, introverts are known to be very thoughtful, although they do not express their feelings or opinions.
Therefore, introverts seem to be best suited to be academics at universities or researchers at research institutes who study a specific field alone for long periods of time.
I also think that I can stand out in the financial part of a company where work needs to be handled carefully.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Happy Tuesday, Sun! 

Reserved people are normally good at maintaining a steady mood. They are not likely to express intense emotions, especially in public, being efficient at managing their emotions. Rather than experiencing the highs and lows of people with a lot of energy, reserved people can keep things level.

- Kristine ^^ 

It is known that introverts generally do not enjoy making friends or talking to other people and prefer to spend time alone.
>> Introverts generally do not enjoy making friends or talking to other people and prefer to spend time alone.
Therefore, I think introverts are not suitable for general companies where they have to meet, talk to, and persuade many people, and sometimes actively promote their products to customers.
>> Therefore, I don't think introverts should work for general companies where they have to meet, talk to, and persuade a lot of people, as well as sometimes actively sell their goods to customers.
However, introverts are known to be very thoughtful, although they do not express their feelings or opinions.
>> However, introverts are known to be very thoughtful, even if they don't say what they think or feel.
Therefore, introverts seem to be best suited to be academics at universities or researchers at research institutes who study a specific field alone for long periods of time.
>> It seems like introverts would do best as professors at universities or researchers at research centers who work alone and study a certain subject for long periods of time.
I also think that I can stand out in the financial part of a company where work needs to be handled carefully.
>> I also believe I can stand out in the financial part of a business where work needs to be done carefully.
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