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Should we always tell the truth?

작성자: 손*희
2024-08-22 482

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Hello, I'm Hana. And I'd like to present my opinion on the topic, "Should we always tell the truth?". Have you ever lied? I'm sure that everyone has lied once in a while, and so did I. From my experience, we don't need to tell the truth. Let me introduce about some reasons about that.
First, lying sometimes helps us in a danger situation. For example, if you receive some questions about your personal information from a suspicious person who is criminal, how are you going to deal with it? Will you tell your name, phone number and your address honestly? I don't think that's a good idea. Some lies also help us by experiencing crime.
Second, lying helps avoid unnecessary conflicts. If you heard the skinder of your friend, are you going to tell this truth to your other friends?? I think that's the way you can fall out very unnecessary conflict. Of course, It is ethically problematic to only lie all the time, but depending on the situation, lies are necessary.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

HI, Hana! Thank you for such a relevant insight. Sometimes, a lot is on the line when we tell the truth. But honesty is always an option. Let us talk more later. See you!
--Teacher Anji



Hello, I'm Hana. And I'd like to present my opinion on the topic, "Should we always tell the truth?".
Hello, I'm Hana, and I'd like to present my opinion on the topic, "Should we always tell the truth?"
Have you ever lied?
>> CORRECT
I'm sure that everyone has lied once in a while, and so did I.
>> I'm sure that everyone has lied once in a while, and so have I.
From my experience, we don't need to tell the truth.
>> From my experience, we don't always need to tell the truth.
Let me introduce about some reasons about that.
>> Let me introduce some reasons for that.
First, lying sometimes helps us in a danger situation.
>>  First, lying sometimes helps us in dangerous situations.
For example, if you receive some questions about your personal information from a suspicious person who is criminal, how are you going to deal with it?>> For example, if you receive questions about your personal information from a suspicious person who is a criminal, how are you going to deal with it?
Will you tell your name, phone number and your address honestly?
>>  Will you honestly tell them your name, phone number, and address?
I don't think that's a good idea.
>>  I don't think that's a good idea.
Some lies also help us by experiencing crime.
>> Some lies also help protect us from experiencing crime.
Second, lying helps avoid unnecessary conflicts.
>> Second, lying helps avoid unnecessary conflicts.
If you heard the skinder of your friend, are you going to tell this truth to your other friends?
>> If you heard gossip about your friend, are you going to tell this truth to your other friends?
I think that's the way you can fall out very unnecessary conflict.
>> I think that could lead to very unnecessary conflict.
Of course, It is ethically problematic to only lie all the time, but depending on the situation, lies are necessary.
>> Of course, it is ethically problematic to lie all the time, but depending on the situation, lies are sometimes necessary.
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