¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

About my dream house

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ¹Ú*Çö
2024-08-21 896

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

When I get older, I want live in big house. It is looks like Ironman's house. And in house, there are many rooms. And this is very important, there are one specail room, and it use for playing drum and guitar. And outside, there are basketball coat. And I can play basketball with my friends and family. It will be so amazing. But I like small house too. And I want to make restarant, and I will sales food. It will be funny.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello, John! I think, you've got so much fun imagining your dream house. I would also want a big house but also a big yard. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
When I get older, I want live in big house. 
>>When I get older, I want to live in a big house. 
It is looks like Ironman's house. 
>>It would be similar to Ironman's house.
And in house, there are many rooms. 
>>Inside it, there will be many rooms.
And this is very important, there are one specail room, and it use for playing drum and guitar. 
>>Most importantly, there is a special room which we can use to play the drum and guitar.
And outside, there are basketball coat. 
>>Outside, there will be a basketball court.
And I can play basketball with my friends and family. 
>>Correct!
It will be so amazing. 
>>Correct!
But I like small house too.
>>But I like small houses, too.
And I want to make restarant, and I will sales food. 
>>I also want to make a restaurant and sell food.
It will be funny.
>>It will be fun!
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
140683 Why is it important to follow guidelines and principles? ½Å*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2024-10-28 445
140682 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-10-28 1
140681 28Oct2024_homework ±è*¶ó ¿Ï·á 2024-10-28 542
140680 home work Àå*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-10-28 532
140679 How much time do you spend outdoors every week? ¿À*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2024-10-28 1202
140678 Homework ±è*Çö ¿Ï·á 2024-10-28 549
140677 Hi sharon ¾î*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-28 1
140676 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most... ÀÌ*À± ¿Ï·á 2024-10-28 576
140675 what place can be like home? ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2024-10-28 550
140674 I want to visit all badminton gym Á¤*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-28 12
140673 Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-10-28 513
140672 homework Àå*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-28 497
140671 get rid of ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-28 0
140670 living room ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-28 1
140669 fireplace ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-28 1
140668 laptop ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-28 1
140667 What impact could reducing income inequality have on social... ¾È*À± ¿Ï·á 2024-10-28 500
140666 About my visit to Philipines ±¸*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-28 476
140665 Homework 🦋 ¿À*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-28 537
140664 What are some red flags that might make you hesitant to be... ±è*¸° ¿Ï·á 2024-10-28 554

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04