¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

How can reading benefit you?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÀÌ*Èñ
2024-08-21 818

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

When l read a book, l don't think benefit. But I know it someday will be benefit. When I was young, l like to read a book. I liked to read novel, essay and culture.l thing to read a book enlarges the mind. But l don't read a book lately. Because my eyes not good and there are many interesting things then book. I should read a book from noe on for my mental health.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi Eva, 

Thank you for doing your homework. Even though you may not always notice immediate benefits, reading can indeed enrich your mind and provide valuable insights. It's great to hear that you enjoyed reading novels, essays, and cultural books when you were younger. Even if you haven¡¯t been reading much lately, getting back into the habit can be very good for your mental health and personal growth. Perhaps finding books that interest you could make reading more enjoyable again. Keep in mind that even short reading sessions can be beneficial! 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

When l read a book, l don't think benefit.  

>>When I read a book, I don't think about the benefits. 

But I know it someday will be benefit.  

>>But I know it will be beneficial someday. 

When I was young, l like to read a book.  

>>When I was young, I liked to read books. 

I liked to read novel, essay and culture. 

>>I liked to read novels, essays, and books about culture. 

l thing to read a book enlarges the mind.  

>>I think reading a book enlarges the mind. 

But l don't read a book lately.  

>>But I haven't been reading books lately. 

Because my eyes not good and there are many interesting things then book.  

>>Because my eyes are not good and there are many more interesting things than books. 

I should read a book from noe on for my mental health. 

>>I should start reading books again for my mental health. 

¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
139918 Homework ¿À*º½ ¿Ï·á 2024-09-13 1
139917 What are the things best talked about over a drink? ±è*¸° ¿Ï·á 2024-09-13 880
139916 Homework ¿À*º½ ¿Ï·á 2024-09-13 1
139915 According to your condition ÀÓ*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2024-09-13 530
139914 Can you talk about three people who have influenced your life? ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2024-09-13 2
139913 Which foods are unhealthy? What is unhealthy about them? ¿À*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2024-09-13 761
139912 Homework ±è*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2024-09-13 1
139911 What do you do to relax after a busy day? ÀÌ*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2024-09-13 3
139910 Homework ¿À*Çö ¿Ï·á 2024-09-13 2
139909 What are the downsides to plastic? ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2024-09-13 872
139908 Trends ÀÌ*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2024-09-13 803
139907 No pain No gain ÀÌ*ÀÓ ¿Ï·á 2024-09-13 1
139906 homework ÀÌ*¼ö ¿Ï·á 2024-09-13 1035
139905 Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-09-13 743
139904 What challenges do people with disability face? ÀÌ*À± ¿Ï·á 2024-09-13 868
139903 homework ½É*Áø ¿Ï·á 2024-09-13 3
139902 12.Sep.2024 ±è*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2024-09-13 0
139901 Favorite god µµ*°æ ¿Ï·á 2024-09-13 1012
139900 Do you prefer a planned vacation or a spontaneous one? Why? ±è*¼± ¿Ï·á 2024-09-13 866
139899 Homework ³ë*ö ÁøÇàÁß 2024-09-13 804

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04