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How can reading benefit you?

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When l read a book, l don't think benefit. But I know it someday will be benefit. When I was young, l like to read a book. I liked to read novel, essay and culture.l thing to read a book enlarges the mind. But l don't read a book lately. Because my eyes not good and there are many interesting things then book. I should read a book from noe on for my mental health.

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Hi Eva, 

Thank you for doing your homework. Even though you may not always notice immediate benefits, reading can indeed enrich your mind and provide valuable insights. It's great to hear that you enjoyed reading novels, essays, and cultural books when you were younger. Even if you haven¡¯t been reading much lately, getting back into the habit can be very good for your mental health and personal growth. Perhaps finding books that interest you could make reading more enjoyable again. Keep in mind that even short reading sessions can be beneficial! 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

When l read a book, l don't think benefit.  

>>When I read a book, I don't think about the benefits. 

But I know it someday will be benefit.  

>>But I know it will be beneficial someday. 

When I was young, l like to read a book.  

>>When I was young, I liked to read books. 

I liked to read novel, essay and culture. 

>>I liked to read novels, essays, and books about culture. 

l thing to read a book enlarges the mind.  

>>I think reading a book enlarges the mind. 

But l don't read a book lately.  

>>But I haven't been reading books lately. 

Because my eyes not good and there are many interesting things then book.  

>>Because my eyes are not good and there are many more interesting things than books. 

I should read a book from noe on for my mental health. 

>>I should start reading books again for my mental health. 

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