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Do you think that there is anything worth dying for?

>>> Honestly no. We usually say that if there is something you really want, dye for it. For example, it might be love, friendship or success. But I never think there isn't more important thing than life. Stoping life is the end! After it, we can't do anything. Although because life is short and limited life is worth, too short life is nothing. So we have to treat for life as most important thing. Never do anything that could end our life even though it is about, I think, our family.

But there is only one exception. that is love for their child. Parents can do everything for their child because the life without their child is not living.

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Thank you for sharing your perspective, Jun!
I hope we always prioritize and take care of our lives as it is the greatest blessing we have. ^^
Chammy

Honestly no. We usually say that if there is something you really want, dye for it.
>> Honestly, no. We often say that if you truly want something, you should die for it.
 For example, it might be love, friendship or success. But I never think there isn't more important thing than life.
>>  For example, it might be love, friendship, or success. But I never think there is anything more important than life.
 Stoping life is the end! 
>> Ending your life means the end of everything!
After it, we can't do anything. Although because life is short and limited life is worth, too short life is nothing. 
>> We can't do anything after that. Although life is short and limited, it is worthy, but making it short is meaningless. 
So we have to treat for life as most important thing. 
>> So we have to treat life as the most important thing. 
Never do anything that could end our life even though it is about, I think, our family.
>>Correct
But there is only one exception. that is love for their child. Parents can do everything for their child because the life without their child is not living.
>> But there is only one exception, that is love for a child. Parents can do everything for their children because life without their children is not worth living.
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