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How do you deal with interpersonal differences in the workplace?

작성자: 이*윤
2024-08-21 463

회원님의 영작문

Since each person has different personalities, I think that differences in interpersonal relationships inevitably occur.
From my first experience, extroverts take it upon themselves to build interpersonal relationships, speak well to others, and build relationships easily.
However, it is relatively difficult for introverts to form interpersonal relationships. It also burdensome to approach without hesitation.
That's why it's better to take time and get close slowly to an introvert than to approach them without hesitation.
And it takes a lot of practice for introverts to build interpersonal relationships.
It will take a lot of effort, but if you keep practicing, you will feel comfortable, so if you keep practicing, let's make a relationship with others.
In Korea, each person seems to his or her own strengths and weaknesses according to the difference in interpersonal relationships.
Therefore, I don't think I need to be too wary or too intimidated.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Yun!
As an introvert, I agree with what you mentioned ^^ The last part made a good remark that we shouldn't be intimidated by one another as we have our own strengths and differences that make us all unique.
Chammy 
Since each person has different personalities, I think that differences in interpersonal relationships inevitably occur.
>> Since each person has a different personality, I think that differences in interpersonal relationships will inevitably occur.
From my first experience, extroverts take it upon themselves to build interpersonal relationships, speak well to others, and build relationships easily.
>> Correct
However, it is relatively difficult for introverts to form interpersonal relationships.
>> Correct
It also burdensome to approach without hesitation.
>>  It is also burdensome to approach without hesitation.
That's why it's better to take time and get close slowly to an introvert than to approach them without hesitation.
And it takes a lot of practice for introverts to build interpersonal relationships.
It will take a lot of effort, but if you keep practicing, you will feel comfortable, so if you keep practicing, let's make a relationship with others.
>> Correct
OR
>>That is why it is preferable to take your time and approach an introvert slowly rather than aggressively.
Introverts need a lot of practice to develop interpersonal interactions.
It will take a lot of effort, but if you keep practicing, you will feel more at ease, so let us continue practicing and form relationships with people.
In Korea, each person seems to his or her own strengths and weaknesses according to the difference in interpersonal relationships.
>>In Korea, each person seems to have his or her own strengths and weaknesses according to the differences in interpersonal relationships.
Therefore, I don't think I need to be too wary or too intimidated.
>> Correct
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