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Writing task: Is it important to do some stretching in the morning? Why or why not?

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2024-08-20 215

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Doing some stretching in the morning is good for the body.
Because people don't use muscles at night, stretching makes them more flexible.
But it is very difficult.
I'm very sleepy in the morning, so I want to sleep more.
In my case, I wake up for an English call.
As soon as I get up, I study English. So I can't do any stretching.

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Hi, MK!
I agree! Stretching in the morning can be very beneficial because, as you said, we don¡¯t use our muscles while sleeping. I am also the type of person who doesn¡¯t do much stretching, but I think we should start doing it!
- T. Caitlyn
Doing some stretching in the morning is good for the body.
>> CORRECT
Because people don't use muscles at night, stretching makes them more flexible.
>> Since people don't use their muscles at night, stretching helps make them more flexible.
But it is very difficult.
>> CORRECT
I'm very sleepy in the morning, so I want to sleep more.
>> CORRECT
In my case, I wake up for an English call.
>> In my case, I wake up for an English class.
As soon as I get up, I study English. 
>> CORRECT
So I can't do any stretching.
>> CORRECT
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