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Is it rude to tell someone that they need to improve their appearance?

>>> Unless that someone is my family or close friend, I can't tell about it because the people's respective priorities are different. In someone case, He might think that appearance is not important and there is more important thing(ex) attitude, personality) than appearance. So telling them that they need to improve their appearance makes them feel absurd and rude. But if it is my close friend case, I will tell about it. Although my friend might not want to be judged his appearance, if there is something that can raise his level of appearance( ex) diet, fashion, shaving..) I will tell because I want to make him nice as best friend.

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Hello, Jun!
I believe that the intent of telling the truth is important. There are people who publicly speak the truth merely to humiliate or shame others, but there are also some who can sincerely give you the truth in order to help you improve.
Chammy
Unless that someone is my family or close friend, I can't tell about it because the people's respective priorities are different.
>>Correct
 In someone case, He might think that appearance is not important and there is more important thing(ex) attitude, personality) than appearance. 
>>  In someone's view, he might think that appearance is not important and there are more important things such as attitude and personality than appearance. 
So telling them that they need to improve their appearance makes them feel absurd and rude
>>Correct
But if it is my close friend case, I will tell about it. 
>> But if it is my close friends' case, I will tell them about it. 
Although my friend might not want to be judged his appearance, if there is something that can raise his level of appearance( ex) diet, fashion, shaving..) 
>> Although my friend may not want to be judged on his appearance if there is something that can increase his level of appearance (for example, diet, fashion, shaving...)
I will tell because I want to make him nice as best friend.
>> I will tell him as a best friend because I want to make him nice.
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