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In Korea, there are lots of band. Like LUCY, Day 6, and QWER. And Korean band is very Handsome and pretty. Because in Korea, people very like handsome and pretty person. And music company take very handsome, pretty drummer, guiterest, and singer. And many people love it.

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Hello, John! What I like the most about Korean bands is their ability to create beautifully-written songs. I am amazed of their musicality and performance. 
-T. Sonny
In Korea, there are lots of band. 
>>Correct!
Like LUCY, Day 6, and QWER. 
>>Some of them are LUCY, Day6, and QWER.
And Korean band is very Handsome and pretty. 
>>The Korean band members are very handsome and pretty.
Because in Korea, people very like handsome and pretty person. 
>>That's because in Korea, people like handsome and pretty people so much.
And music company take very handsome, pretty drummer, guiterest, and singer. 
>>Music companies cast good-looking drummers, guitarists, and singers.
And many people love it.
>>And many people love them.
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