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What was the last thing you did that made you feel so much better?

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Reading a book named 'Ä¿Æ°ÄÝÀº »ç¾çÇÒ°Ô¿ä' was the last thing i did that made my feel so much better. Because reading a book is been a long time and makes me feel peaceful. There is a season when I fall in love with books. I think I fall into reading books when I'm having a hard time. These time, I am fascinated by Korean novels like healing story and beautiful sentences. When I had trouble with human relationships, I fell into a self-development book to find the solution. But this time My head is complicated and tired so, I need some rest. And that's why I read Korean novels.

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Hey there, Lin! It¡¯s great to hear that reading brings you peace and comfort, especially when you¡¯re feeling overwhelmed. It sounds like Korean novels are really resonating with you right now.
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Reading a book named 'Ä¿Æ°ÄÝÀº »ç¾çÇÒ°Ô¿ä' was the last thing i did that made my feel so much better. 
>>Reading a book named 'Ä¿Æ°ÄÝÀº »ç¾çÇÒ°Ô¿ä' was the last thing I did that made me feel so much better.
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>> Engaging with the book titled 'Ä¿Æ°ÄÝÀº »ç¾çÇÒ°Ô¿ä' was the most recent activity that significantly enhanced my well-being.
Because reading a book is been a long time and makes me feel peaceful. 
>>Since it has been a long time since I read a book, it has made me feel peaceful.
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>>Since it¡¯s been a while since I picked up a book, it has really put my mind at ease.
There is a season when I fall in love with books. 
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>>There¡¯s a time when I¡¯m head over heels for books.
I think I fall into reading books when I'm having a hard time.
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>>I find myself turning to books when I'm having a hard time.
These time, I am fascinated by Korean novels like healing story and beautiful sentences. 
>>This time, I am fascinated by Korean novels, like / such as healing stories and beautiful sentences.
When I had trouble with human relationships, I fell into a self-development book to find the solution. 
Correct,or
>>When I faced difficulties with human relationships, I turned to a self-development book to find a solution.
But this time My head is complicated and tired so, I need some rest. And that's why I read Korean novels.
>>But this time, my mind is complicated and tired, so I need some rest. That¡¯s why I¡¯m reading Korean novels.
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>>However, at this moment, my mind is overwhelmed and fatigued, necessitating some respite. Consequently, I have turned to reading Korean novels
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