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What was the last thing you did that made you feel so much better?

작성자: 김*린
2024-08-19 2101

회원님의 영작문

Reading a book named '커튼콜은 사양할게요' was the last thing i did that made my feel so much better. Because reading a book is been a long time and makes me feel peaceful. There is a season when I fall in love with books. I think I fall into reading books when I'm having a hard time. These time, I am fascinated by Korean novels like healing story and beautiful sentences. When I had trouble with human relationships, I fell into a self-development book to find the solution. But this time My head is complicated and tired so, I need some rest. And that's why I read Korean novels.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey there, Lin! It’s great to hear that reading brings you peace and comfort, especially when you’re feeling overwhelmed. It sounds like Korean novels are really resonating with you right now.
~T. Jenna

Reading a book named '커튼콜은 사양할게요' was the last thing i did that made my feel so much better. 
>>Reading a book named '커튼콜은 사양할게요' was the last thing I did that made me feel so much better.
OR
>> Engaging with the book titled '커튼콜은 사양할게요' was the most recent activity that significantly enhanced my well-being.
Because reading a book is been a long time and makes me feel peaceful. 
>>Since it has been a long time since I read a book, it has made me feel peaceful.
OR
>>Since it’s been a while since I picked up a book, it has really put my mind at ease.
There is a season when I fall in love with books. 
Correct,or
>>There’s a time when I’m head over heels for books.
I think I fall into reading books when I'm having a hard time.
Correct,or
>>I find myself turning to books when I'm having a hard time.
These time, I am fascinated by Korean novels like healing story and beautiful sentences. 
>>This time, I am fascinated by Korean novels, like / such as healing stories and beautiful sentences.
When I had trouble with human relationships, I fell into a self-development book to find the solution. 
Correct,or
>>When I faced difficulties with human relationships, I turned to a self-development book to find a solution.
But this time My head is complicated and tired so, I need some rest. And that's why I read Korean novels.
>>But this time, my mind is complicated and tired, so I need some rest. That’s why I’m reading Korean novels.
OR
>>However, at this moment, my mind is overwhelmed and fatigued, necessitating some respite. Consequently, I have turned to reading Korean novels
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